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Pulse of Sighs

i bathe in your scent when midnight rips my skin’s hems then once, twice in flames a heated pulse of deep craving finally explodes in sighs ------ Love Note for Rick Parise

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2013 11:21:00 AM

Passionate lines penned..Enjoyed reading your unique creativity..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments always bring a smile to my face..Sara

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/25/2013 10:57:00 AM

OH DEAR!!!! Dripping with passion! Classy....not crass! ;) Thanks for the visit, sweetie...you amaze!

Daver Austin

Date: 6/24/2013 9:56:00 AM

A real fast-breather, nette. Love, daver

Len Gasun

Date: 6/23/2013 9:13:00 AM

Hi, my dear friend Nette! How are you? Hope you're doing well & has arrived there safe. I'm stopping by to read this excellently romantic poem of yours. Thumbs up always my dearest friend! Always a winner for me. Thank you so much for your nice comments on my poem. I'm so sorry again 'cuz I didn't know we're going to push through with our retreat & I was wishing that I can catch you up after;(((.Hope you'll understand. Big big hugs, to you. Soupmail pls. love lots, Leonora

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 6/23/2013 2:01:00 AM

You spoiled my work.I'm calling my girl. sexy...romantic....very artful...great!

Kash Poet

Date: 6/22/2013 12:24:00 PM

Wow soo romantic Nette! Love it!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/21/2013 11:39:00 PM

Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/21/2013 7:56:00 AM

This is how all 1st dates should feel like. ;) I kid, sorta. Strong lines, Nette!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/20/2013 9:56:00 PM

WOW!! That is exactly how I feel after reading this dynamite write, WOW!! This is a wonderful and inviting poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious piece this evening! What a superior poem, a passionate write, Great Work!!