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Pulse of Sighs

i bathe in your scent
when midnight rips my skin’s hems
then once, twice in flames
a heated pulse of deep craving
finally explodes in sighs

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Love Note for Rick Parise

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2013

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Sara Kendrick Date: 6/25/2013 11:21:00 AM Passionate lines penned..Enjoyed reading your unique creativity..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments always bring a smile to my face..Sara Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 6/25/2013 10:57:00 AM OH DEAR!!!! Dripping with passion! Classy....not crass! ;) Thanks for the visit, sweetie...you amaze! Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 6/24/2013 9:56:00 AM A real fast-breather, nette. Love, daver Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 6/23/2013 9:13:00 AM Hi, my dear friend Nette! How are you? Hope you're doing well & has arrived there safe. I'm stopping by to read this excellently romantic poem of yours. Thumbs up always my dearest friend! Always a winner for me. Thank you so much for your nice comments on my poem. I'm so sorry again 'cuz I didn't know we're going to push through with our retreat & I was wishing that I can catch you up after;(((.Hope you'll understand. Big big hugs, to you. Soupmail pls. love lots, Leonora Login to Reply

Poet. Undertaker Date: 6/23/2013 2:01:00 AM You spoiled my work.I'm calling my girl. sexy...romantic....very artful...great! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 6/22/2013 12:24:00 PM Wow soo romantic Nette! Love it! Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/21/2013 11:39:00 PM Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs Login to Reply

Poet Tacito Date: 6/21/2013 7:56:00 AM This is how all 1st dates should feel like. ;) I kid, sorta. Strong lines, Nette!!! Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 6/20/2013 9:56:00 PM WOW!! That is exactly how I feel after reading this dynamite write, WOW!! This is a wonderful and inviting poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious piece this evening! What a superior poem, a passionate write, Great Work!! Login to Reply