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Pulling No Punches

"Let me draw your bath, Sweet Face!"
(the space heater's perched upon the rim,
with some hydrochloric acid, just in case.)

My .45 revolver, my machete from Trelew
will come in very handy, lest 
the other two exigencies fall through.

I think I've thought of everything
except that creep you slept with,
I'll sneak up, and take him by surprise!  

Now the the only thing remaining,
harlot, bane of my existence,
is my holler of delight at your demise!

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  1. Date: 7/29/2012 1:00:00 AM
    I think this will raise some eyebrows in any potetial girlfriends Keith... an electric start with cutting intentions and the other means of your intendeds end don't seem a whole barrell of laughs!! ( weel done )

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 11:08:00 AM
    Ouch! A sure reminder not to cross you, Keith! Fun write, as always 'executed' with your usual flair:) Hope all's well with you! Best wishes, love, Mikki

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 10:32:00 PM
    I would just like to add, 9 months ago I was bashed from some people that I thought were my friends, because I didn't give them $20,000 dollars I have spent many sleepless nights thinking of revenge but you know it's not me & i will not lower myself to their level, instead i chose to forgive them & move on with my life..

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 10:28:00 PM
    Oh my, yes revenge can be sweet but is it worth it, we have to live our life & except our journey i hope you make peace on your's Keith great write bit off the wall but that's what i like well done :)

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 7:36:00 AM
    Revenge is so very sweet Keith; just hope you don't get caught! :)

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 4:52:00 AM
    Hi Keith - 2 soup mails.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 8:46:00 PM
    cruel thoughts ,hahahaha,had me shivering Keith,but I loved every line

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 6:42:00 PM
    wow! a bit different from your usual writes but brilliant, of course. i'm not sure if i'd have identified this as one of yours had i not seen your name, though. interesting!

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 8:01:00 AM
    Keith, what are you thinking? Sweet revenge I guess (slightly over the top). love, Kathy

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 10:08:00 PM
    Creepy, but me likes!! (I'm a sTephen King fan, so this is fun for me to read!)

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 7:03:00 PM
    alas, true love. though some might not agree. i agree whole heartedly.

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 1:15:00 PM
    i like the turn-out of this verse, keith... how you can carry the theme with lightness amazes me... great stuff!.. happy saturday!.:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 12:18:00 PM
    Hi Kieth I will stick to the mushrooms this seems to do the trick for me lol, graet write, have a good weekend my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 9:39:00 AM
    wow, guess he thought of everything. kind of humorous in a a to my demise way, another way to look at "til death do us part-best regards, Cindy

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 7:00:00 AM
    Ha, ha, oh Kieth this is so funny! You have written a wondrous write my friend! This is a wonderful demise poem, written so eloquently with different feats of endings, which is truly elegant! Great Work!!