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Pulling No Punches

"Let me draw your bath, Sweet Face!"
(the space heater's perched upon the rim,
with some hydrochloric acid, just in case.)

My .45 revolver, my machete from Trelew
will come in very handy, lest 
the other two exigencies fall through.

I think I've thought of everything
except that creep you slept with,
I'll sneak up, and take him by surprise!  

Now the the only thing remaining,
harlot, bane of my existence,
is my holler of delight at your demise!

Copyright © Keith Bickerstaffe | Year Posted 2012

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Joe Maverick Date: 7/29/2012 1:00:00 AM I think this will raise some eyebrows in any potetial girlfriends Keith... an electric start with cutting intentions and the other means of your intendeds end don't seem a whole barrell of laughs!! ( weel done ) Login to Reply

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 7/23/2012 11:08:00 AM Ouch! A sure reminder not to cross you, Keith! Fun write, as always 'executed' with your usual flair:) Hope all's well with you! Best wishes, love, Mikki Login to Reply

Kerry Singleton Date: 7/20/2012 10:32:00 PM I would just like to add, 9 months ago I was bashed from some people that I thought were my friends, because I didn't give them $20,000 dollars I have spent many sleepless nights thinking of revenge but you know it's not me & i will not lower myself to their level, instead i chose to forgive them & move on with my life.. Login to Reply

Kerry Singleton Date: 7/20/2012 10:28:00 PM Oh my, yes revenge can be sweet but is it worth it, we have to live our life & except our journey i hope you make peace on your's Keith great write bit off the wall but that's what i like well done :) Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 7/18/2012 7:36:00 AM Revenge is so very sweet Keith; just hope you don't get caught! :) Login to Reply

Kathryn Collins Date: 7/18/2012 4:52:00 AM Hi Keith - 2 soup mails. Login to Reply

Richard Palmer Date: 7/17/2012 8:46:00 PM cruel thoughts ,hahahaha,had me shivering Keith,but I loved every line Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 7/17/2012 6:42:00 PM wow! a bit different from your usual writes but brilliant, of course. i'm not sure if i'd have identified this as one of yours had i not seen your name, though. interesting! Login to Reply

Kathryn Collins Date: 7/17/2012 8:01:00 AM Keith, what are you thinking? Sweet revenge I guess (slightly over the top). love, Kathy Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/16/2012 10:08:00 PM Creepy, but me likes!! (I'm a sTephen King fan, so this is fun for me to read!) Login to Reply

The Situation Date: 7/16/2012 7:03:00 PM alas, true love. though some might not agree. i agree whole heartedly. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/14/2012 1:15:00 PM i like the turn-out of this verse, keith... how you can carry the theme with lightness amazes me... great stuff!.. happy saturday!.:) huggs! Login to Reply

Cindy Cayton Date: 7/14/2012 9:39:00 AM wow, guess he thought of everything. kind of humorous in a a to my demise way, another way to look at "til death do us part-best regards, Cindy Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 7/14/2012 7:00:00 AM Ha, ha, oh Kieth this is so funny! You have written a wondrous write my friend! This is a wonderful demise poem, written so eloquently with different feats of endings, which is truly elegant! Great Work!! Login to Reply