Pull Though

we live in an angelic world made by numbers
all that i know that its made by nature
stones fall and trees grow
day by day we all grow together
all along we live in a beautiful world
we all rejoice together and bound together like leafs on a tree 
just like how they fall and die
we can all do it some how we all have
some one to lean on
close our eyes and get lost in motion transition between man and nature
we can all pull though
sea is spinning around the world
the rain comes and goes 
every time you see the snow comes a white light in our eyes
we all grow with cakes and candles
the old faces fade and so do the new
but we all live in a beautiful world
the sun rises every morning 
for some others have there backs turn
but wats ever happed to our souls its happened to someone else
so dont look back and grow old
burn your anger not your soul
just think that your still have this beautiful world
were the sun will always smile in the morning at you
every time i look around i see beautiful
long green grass
gliding objects all over my head
and me and you together
i know we can all live together as the light touches our hands we think of future plans
so make me unstopperble
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 11/21/2009 2:26:00 PM
become unstoppable. great poem. congrats
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Date: 11/21/2009 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest! I really like the flow of your poem.
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Date: 11/20/2009 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning poem, Jason! Well done!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/26/2009 11:39:00 AM
Interesting views on the world and life. Like our style. Welcome to soup. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/26/2009 11:19:00 AM
I really enjoyed this write. Well done.
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Date: 10/26/2009 10:09:00 AM
Thought provoking poem, Jason! Good write. I enjoyed this one! Keep writing! Peace, Ladybug12
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Date: 10/26/2009 4:25:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem.welcome to poetry soup--Charma:)
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Date: 10/25/2009 1:58:00 PM
Very inspirational. What a rich morning I have had reading great poetry. I like the way you see things. That's tight. :) Thank you for sharing and thank you for your comment on my poem. Caroline.
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Date: 1/12/2009 4:16:00 PM
smile, this poem is amazing and beautiful as well as nature always inhances anything it touches. enjoyed reading it and have a good day.
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Date: 1/12/2009 4:00:00 PM
amazing
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