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Pseudonym

Life, as a pseudonym, Drags its shadow's shadow, which snarls Itself around traffic cones and Streetlamps, tearing at its skin With deliberate intimacy To alarm light witnessed Only through strained peripheral vision. A lace-stitched veil Slips through sidewalk cracks, Unisolated windows, Cataract smooth eyes. The flesh of the matter invades Such as the Red Death In living color--Vibrant Cadavers speak the language of Love: Mortality; It slides over possessive nouns, sticky As salivation, Push and rattle and harbor themselves against Warm, wet cavities eroded In the backside of actualities Sweet Tooth. Authentic miasma, honest illness. Any footprints discarded in covers of dust In which Fear has been recognized Yield into thoughts by persuasion Of waves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/21/2012 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win. Lee
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Date: 8/21/2012 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Jenna. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2012 2:02:00 AM
Jenna belated congrats on your win...David
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Date: 8/18/2012 8:22:00 AM
Such a well-deserved winning poem, and each line a image of age stalking at the heels......wow!
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Date: 8/18/2012 8:10:00 AM
Oh man, thanks you guys! It really means a whole bunch ^.^ I didn't expect to win at all. Oh man.
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Date: 8/18/2012 7:32:00 AM
An excellent combination of words to bring images to life. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/18/2012 1:16:00 AM
I agree with what Nance said......the poem is a marvellous word experience....congrats and well done indeed.....Syd
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Date: 8/17/2012 8:55:00 PM
OUTSTANDING!! sticky as salivation, discarded footprints covering over the fear..... waves aren't so sticky, they're pretty wet, tho. Thank you SO MUCH, Jenna for supporting my contest and if you'd like me to mail you an Occupy Gainesville t-shirt, please soup mail me a physical mailing address. Thanks and namaste~ N
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