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Promise Me

Promise Me When the misted hill Shivers first You will be my blanket Forever and Ever. That on the long walk Promise me still Your arm will join my elbow, Like Siamese twins, When day gathers night Slowly. And in our room, Promise The outlines we make Etch the shadows Softly. Then again, Promise me the Spot Just behind that bend in your knee That whispers Sweetly. And not the least, Promise me The cleft and borrow between Yours eyes and hair Where kisses are born Truly. So too, Promise When the sun is furthest in our tender sleep The curve we make is gentle, Gentle. Yet, above all, When we rise to greet the Almsman’s bell Please Give Honestly, Promise me. Jeff Troyer October 2007

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Date: 3/9/2011 3:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Jeff. Love Carol
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Date: 12/14/2010 6:01:00 PM
Many thanks for the uplifting comments. May love conquer all and peace be with us.
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Date: 12/14/2010 8:18:00 AM
So romantic, so full ove love and adoration... Lucky you Jeff... Congrats on your feature! Lay
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Jeff. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2010 3:18:00 PM
sweet. lucky you both! share and share forever together. thank you, chuck
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Date: 9/11/2010 8:14:00 PM
nice write, enjoyed this one tonight..P.D.
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