Get Your Premium Membership

Promise Her

Sometimes when girls push you away, It's because they want you to stay. She could see you were at bay that day, So true love was the test she gave, Hoping you wouldn't give up, To such a test, That brought you closer. Now that she knows the love is true, Hold her, She just wants you to be with her. When she looked into your eyes Babe, That was the clue! Promise her no harms, Promise her the next day, And your shoulder for her head to lay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/20/2013 6:50:00 PM
I found some intriguing thoughts here. I like the way it is written. Seldom do I read such good free verse. I have posted a wool-puller's blog in case you have any comments on the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/20/2013 8:18:00 AM
True....congratulations
Login to Reply
Date: 4/19/2013 6:29:00 PM
Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 4/19/2013 10:20:00 AM
Danielle, Congratulations :-) with your awesome win in Isaiah's "Pull the Wool Over My Eyes!" contest : > LINDA < :
Login to Reply
Date: 4/16/2013 12:06:00 PM
- So young and writes so well, you are clever! - It is very nice that you read my poem, you are welcome back anytime you wish Danielle. - - Thanks for your kind visit and nice comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry