Promise

The day holds promise. New beginnings bring sunrise, a dawn for new starts.

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Kim Hilliker

Date: 5/1/2010 4:12:00 PM

Beautiful Senryu! We all love new beginnings.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2010 9:14:00 AM

I like this. This is how dawn makes most people feel. Very nice, Judy. LUv, Andrea

The Fringe

Date: 3/21/2010 11:54:00 PM

Yep, new starts and new beliefs or should I say the "reality of shattered stained-glass windows"?--which is at least honest. That's my shattered perspective of your wonderful words anyways lol. Good write. I see you strive for honesty--it shows. David B

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/5/2010 9:53:00 AM

I am enjoying reading everyone's poetry today. I am glad to see your poetry posted here amongest the others I am reading today Judy. Wishing you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol

Joanna Smith

Date: 3/4/2010 2:31:00 PM

very impressive senryu i enjoyed the read. Jo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2010 2:00:00 PM

Sounds like a great change for the better in one's life. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/4/2010 1:54:00 PM

May you have a beautiful warm sunrise....beautiful..Charma