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Priming September's Fall

~September of remembrance to savor, after grueling August drought, 
~Ever so pleasing, such as enjoying just one rain spout.

~Priming is timing an equinox change, adjusting period format,
~Timing is crucial as squirrels scamper about storing their winter’s fat. 

~Enormous are the compose piles in back yards and the wilds, 
~Major rich habitat, create images of squirming earth worm smiles.
~But yes, four seasons for good reason change human attitude, 
~Enough  recycles, and change rearrange human habitude. 
~Remembering the equinox of fall, expressing to Creator some gratitude. 

In Honor of Carol Brown
And Contest: Fall is Just Around The Corner

Copyright © john freeman

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  1. Date: 9/13/2011 10:46:00 AM
    My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : ) And thanks - loved your contest

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 12:32:00 AM
    Congrats, awsome job:)

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 3:51:00 PM
    Just great John your verse has been improving with leaps and bounds..throughly enjoyable, congrad's light & love

  1. Date: 9/8/2011 11:05:00 PM
    Congratulations John on your win with this poem in praise of fall. Joyce

  1. Date: 9/8/2011 8:52:00 AM
    fall is honored with your write!! congrats in the contest win!!

  1. Date: 9/8/2011 1:39:00 AM
    congrats on your win in the contest John with this great entry

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 11:21:00 PM
    A nice take on September. Congratulations on your win. Well done. Lee

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 9:48:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,john

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 8:06:00 PM
    Congrats on your creative win..Enjoyed..Sara

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 5:08:00 PM
    congrats on your 1st place win in the contest, a thoughtful and spiritual write...

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 4:39:00 PM
    Many congrats to you, John : )

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 4:30:00 PM
    Congrats on the win, John! Like your unique, thoughtful take on the contest. Cheers, Cyndi

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 1:04:00 PM
    you are tops, moe… a happy blast of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 12:55:00 PM
    hey john congrats on a great win, love it..David

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 12:54:00 PM
    September's scenery is portrayed beautifully in your poem, John. Very nice work! Congratulations on your first-place win. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 10:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 10:49:00 AM
    Congrats Moses on first place win with this cool write for Fall luv..

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 10:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in my contest Moses. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/6/2011 1:36:00 PM
    wow! i'm sure this will be on the winner's list. great descriptions, especially the squirrels, and awesome ending :)

  1. Date: 9/6/2011 2:42:00 AM
    John: Your awareness and understanding gained through experience or study is appreciated. Your creations have never been boring my friend. You have a talent. Love reading your works. CR