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Precious Time

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Precious Time

With heavenly glow surrounding you,
I watch as you sleep;
I wonder where you may go
when you take your life's leap

I watch you breathe...so quiet
like the time that has already fallen;
I know the days aren't endless,
and one day you will find your callin'

So right now, I watch you closely
because I've been given such a gift;
for you are my daughter with that glow,
and with my spirit... you always uplift.



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  1. Date: 4/29/2012 6:52:00 PM
    A wonderful sweet write, enjoyed this very much.

  1. Date: 3/10/2012 1:32:00 AM
    Lovely George truly so.xx Thanks for your lovley comments sorry if I am missing some of your works but life has a nasty habit of getting in the way xx

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 9:46:00 PM
    a vivid portrait painted George with incredible imagery and words luv..

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 5:42:00 PM
    A delightful work that shows so much love and care for one's child..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/1/2012 7:33:00 PM
    enjoyed reading your loving poem....