Precious

In light 
of the moon face 
a star dances 
upon ocean waves 
black clouds lift 
become grey 
smiling happiness 
I open 
just for you 
in her silver reflection 
windows to 
this very soul 

whispering winds 
our two hearts 
casting magical spells 
lost in each other 
with really soft 
yet gentle feelings 
kissing emotions 
you become 
the adventure 
within paradise island 

I found 
a captain's bounty 
in a precious jewel 
within a circle 
of love 
as the grail sparkles 
golden shining 
holding one's breath 
with a 
treasured view 

handing over keys 
to each chamber 
begging enter 
into this deep ocean 
emotions swimming within 
priceless feelings 
a life time promise 
holding love 
one bathing beauty 
embracing the dream 
I see in you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 11/10/2013 6:59:00 PM
Our two hearts casting magic spells..lost in each other with really soft yet gentle feelings-So soft such verse..Like the trickling sound of early raindrops on a silent pond..Just beautiful.
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Date: 11/8/2013 6:19:00 PM
softly inviting a pleasure that is affectionate,liam.. well penned!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/8/2013 4:32:00 PM
- Liam, thank you for not stopped writing your beautiful romantic poem. - Never stop ... !!! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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