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Praising Bushels

Chorus gowned wheat heads Ascending their August hymn Final requiem

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Laurie Ginn

Date: 9/19/2009 11:31:00 AM

First of all this made me smile. I was driving on a little country road for my job and looked in a meadow at the sun hitting the tassels on the tops of corn stalks. I thought they looked so stately, straight, stong and proud. I know its silly but this remindd me of it. Secondly you are so dear. My life is crazy busy right now but I think about the soup alot. I hope to be back when I get some organization in my schedule. One small note touched my heart deeply Abe,what a gift it was. Thanks friend

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 9/17/2009 12:38:00 PM

sounds like a farm congregation nice alo.......

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/16/2009 7:05:00 AM

nice play on words you are a natural

James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 1:41:00 PM

Honorable Hymn Abe, delicate write>>James

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/11/2009 7:43:00 AM

Reverant and beautiful praise, Abe. Great Haiku! Love, Robin

Corinne Curcio

Date: 9/10/2009 9:37:00 AM

Sad, yet it made me smile. Well done sir

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2009 11:36:00 AM

Nicely written Haiku of Harvest Praise. God speed in the contest. Sara

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/9/2009 8:50:00 AM

What a nice Haiku, Abe, a real hymn on summer. And thank you for you comment...Gert

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/9/2009 8:40:00 AM

Amazing poem....it makes one feel rather sad that harvest is near an end....the seasons come and go too quickly! (answering your kind comment and question....fortunately no wild fires in our area, it seems So Calif has been plagued this year. We are way up north. Of course, we aren't done with fire season, so we hope nothing happens to flare things up. Where our cabin is, (5,000 ft elev.) so far it has been safe, but everyone takes precautions. It could happen anywhere in California.