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Power of Her Light

La Lune, La lune Upon your hills highest point We lay, awaiting as you to chase away the sun Upon your hills all about we are strewn. Object above so high, scientists swoon Others call to you in the form of three Maiden Mother and Crone Strong feminine deity Earth and her beings are bound to this Goddess so profound Driving men insane Casting darkened shadows in your wane Driving seas and water to purge and flow Beams like a lover's hand move so slow Inspiring the brush of the artist to forge Endymion's Sleep Whilst others dance nude Around a fire, offerings of love so deep Artemis, Shiva, Isis, Under any name, your followers Ask for your guidance in crisis Blamed for ravenous killings by the wolf Your fullest nights, humans cowered in fear Yet to others your light brings auspicious cheer Oh how many tears have been cried under your light? Oh how many times have your powers brought right? Oh Luna do you see us in our devotional plight?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/3/2014 2:12:00 AM
A delight to read the poem. Congrats on the win, Amy
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Date: 5/3/2014 12:31:00 AM
gosh, I like this even more seeing this a second time, Amy. What passionate writing on the moon. Congrats on a very well deserved win.
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Date: 5/1/2014 10:18:00 PM
Powerful feelings portrayed in this one Amy ! great win congrats !
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Date: 5/1/2014 7:01:00 PM
Amy you are impressing me with your many wins. Congrats & Hugs ------ Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/30/2010 4:51:00 PM
Dear Amy, Congratulations on YOUR Well deserved Win in Dr. Ram Mehta's Contest "Luna - The Moon Goddess" I must ask Did YOU do research on Luna or did YOU know about "Artemis, Shiva, and Isis? Very well written Poetry I enjoy YOUR Rhyme YOUR Liege ALWAYS LOVE...HG - Soup Mail Call
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Date: 7/17/2010 8:16:00 PM
Congratulations Amy, on your win. I loved this, especially your last stanza. It was awesome!
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Date: 7/15/2010 2:44:00 PM
I particularly liked the kryeille aspect to the end...I think it could be made into a prayer easily! Congrad's Amy & Thanks so much for my win too! Yes The Body & the Blood makes me cry myself when ever I read it...tears of anger!
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Date: 7/15/2010 9:49:00 AM
Fantastic win, Amy! Congratulations as this is worthy, indeed! Peace, love, audrey
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Date: 7/13/2010 7:33:00 AM
Good Morning to Awesome Amy ... never got your soup mail .. so if u want to resend .. I will be on a little while this morning ... is it about the contest? with luv..
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Date: 7/13/2010 3:10:00 AM
Congratulations Amy, on placing in the “Luna - the goddess of moon” contest with this imaginative poem. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 7/12/2010 4:35:00 PM
I like the way you made this all about different titles of the moon given by different cultures thru time. A great win, Amy. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/12/2010 1:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this Amy! this is really a beautiful piece, almost reads like a lyric, especially your last stanza with all those questions in the end-- very nice-- nikko :)
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations Amy on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Luna-the goddess of moon". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations Amy, on your worthy poem's success in Dr Ram's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:55:00 AM
Awesome poem, Amy. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:50:00 AM
OH ..its an honor to be sharing fifth place with u A.A. from the "Sweeteheart"....
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:48:00 AM
Congrats Awesome Amy on your winning poem in the Luna contest with another superior write on this great theme.. luv your words ALL the time.. enjoy your big win my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/12/2010 7:41:00 AM
Beautiful and enchanting, Amy. Congratulations on your win. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/12/2010 5:59:00 AM
The second stanza is awesome..congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 7/12/2010 5:52:00 AM
Congrats on the 5th place win in my contest
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Date: 7/10/2010 4:32:00 PM
She does indeed hold a hypnotic power it seems....with either evil forces, or perhaps beauty and love....whichever or whenever the mood strikes...she uses it!! Great poem, Amy...a wonderful entry to the contest!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/10/2010 12:12:00 PM
Forgot ... my entry is Mythology Moonglow for Dr. Ram and his exquisite contest.. luv..
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Date: 7/10/2010 12:08:00 PM
Hey are we still contest collaborating when my other commitment is complete? .. luv..
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Date: 7/10/2010 12:07:00 PM
Being on vacation has enhanced your talent Awesome Amy .. its a true gift to write so fast and so profound.. this is for sure in the winners circle my friend.. its a gorgeous take on the Moon and Dr. Ram should flip over your wording.. good luck.. with luv..
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