Possibilities

See the toddler traipsing by
His diaper hanging low

See the cool cat in his baggy pants
How much lower can they go?

Toddler seems to have made a number two
Really needs a diaper change

For the young fella with the baggy pants
Appears that possibility may also be true?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 11/21/2013 1:09:00 AM
This is awesomely funny Donald. Hope the fellas will pull them up little bit, I mean pull up the denim diapers! JM
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Date: 9/21/2012 5:29:00 AM
Great write.Reminds me of our toddler'mapalo'.
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Date: 8/22/2012 5:51:00 PM
cute write. Do I know you? Cindy Cayton
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Date: 8/21/2012 6:33:00 PM
Love it... have been thinking the same thing! LOL Kerry Singleton says she feels like pulling them up. I feel like pulling them down! LOL! Cheers, Jack
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Date: 8/21/2012 5:43:00 PM
I totally agree with this one..I saw a fellow the other day and he absolutely had them hanging just above the knees..Could you imagine trying to walk in those pants?...Great topic and presentation..Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that you shared with your wife and she found it funny also..Sara
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Date: 8/18/2012 5:23:00 PM
Funny; would love to read this to some of the students at school.
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Date: 8/15/2012 9:54:00 PM
Need for changes it seems with the possibilities at 50%...Nice verse! Cynthia
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Date: 8/14/2012 4:01:00 AM
Baggy pants annoy me, feel like pulling them up.. good write Donald & thank you for your visit :)
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Date: 8/12/2012 1:20:00 PM
Donald I like, thanks for your comments..David
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Date: 8/11/2012 11:43:00 PM
baggy pants is a fad I have never understood, another witty piece you've penned
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Date: 8/11/2012 10:50:00 PM
Sphincter muscles controlling the bladder usually get weaker in the elderly. Diapers are for the extremes both young and old. Good write.
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