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Portrait of Mr F Shui

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Portrait of Mr F Shui

Written by Gail DeBole on February 4, 2013

A man with the name of Feng Shui
Arranged his life in a Qi-loving way.
Full of sweet harmony,
And life planned to a “T”,
Bad Karma didn’t “stand” in his way!

Note: Part of the Portrait Collection

Copyright © Gail DeBole

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  1. Date: 4/28/2014 5:50:00 AM
    Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, gail

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 1:32:00 PM
    An outstanding limerick... Well done~A.O

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 3:52:00 PM
    Cleaver limerick. Rick

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 9:06:00 PM
    Dear Gail,Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I have never written a Limerick but I do Appreciate them and this is Superb. I will start reading YOUR Portrait Collection. - I was just reading Harry Horsman's Winning Poem "Living POETRY" in the Contest "One of YOUR Greatest Days" Sponsored by Dan Kearley. I noticed YOU commented on this POEM before He Won. I was wondering if YOU were going to send him Congrats. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 1:31:00 AM
    wow, so different, and so good

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 3:47:00 PM
    ha! very funny!

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 2:27:00 PM
    Gail, a nice limerick - lovely. - Thank you for your visit on my last poem. - Buttons are not trash - they can be used for much ..... use your imagination. - (Flower pins, hair ornaments , on card, on pillows .....) Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 2:26:00 PM
    Great one with a little twist on words and humor..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by ..It is windy, cloudy, and cool to me but was above freezing this morn..Sara

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 2:08:00 PM
    Thanks for the history, xxx