Poppa Jack

Sweet Erin confessed her love for me More love than her real Poppa That was really quite difficult to hear Never really knew her saga Once asked if I could adopt sweet Erin She agreed, with no hesitation So sweet to know she loves me that much But so sad to hear this revelation Her Mommy and Daddy were separated Many years before we met Apparently he was never a good Daddy Erin harbours the anger yet! Such a sweetie, my dear dear Erin Love her to bits and more A daughter I wished I had always had She makes this Poppa's heart soar © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 12/3/2013 6:27:00 AM
This is very nice, Jack. Who is this girl? Is she related to you somehow by blood?
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Date: 12/2/2013 1:23:00 AM
You never cease to amaze me my friend... A beautiful poem XOXOX
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Date: 12/1/2013 9:17:00 PM
Sweet..keep her close to your heart. BG
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Date: 12/1/2013 8:43:00 AM
I adopted Casey, and you can adopt Erin... We're more alike than I thought! Lucky you! Except you don't have a Dragon, of course... Do you want a Dragon? Grandpa Troll may be able to get you one... Wouldn't that be cool... We could swap Dragon stories... But you'd have to ask Cathie first... Dragons can be quite over whelming, some times... More so than 2 college kids... LOL
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Date: 12/1/2013 8:57:00 AM
I'll get back to you on the Dragon thing till after I ask Cathie, okay! LOL xoxoxoxox
Date: 12/1/2013 7:40:00 AM
Wow, Jack, this is a beautiful write, you have written a very touching poem for Erin! You are so very compassionate my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 12/1/2013 8:03:00 AM
As I said to Charmaine, I love this sweetie so much and to know she considers me as her adopted Poppa Jack makes me so sooooo happy!
Date: 12/1/2013 7:28:00 AM
Heart touching poem ..Sad in a way but blessed in another.Beautifully penned Jack.Im so happy to be here..Hope i ll have more time to read more.
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Date: 12/1/2013 7:39:00 AM
So nice to hear from you, my dearest Charmaine! Sweet Erin is a Mom with twins of her own! Sweet that she thinks of me as her adopted Dada but so sad to hear about her real Dad! I love her sooooo much! Love and big big hugs xoxox
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