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He fills me 
Like a supermarket
Bubble gum dispenser
With black eyes
Of condescension
Give me a dime
Eye will give you

A glance 

That will POP
Your bubble


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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:21:00 AM
    A great Free -for-all winning poem. *CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome winning write. have a great day, TA TA TA * Linda

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 12:31:00 AM
    Congrats, Susan, it's great poetry!!

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 11:54:00 PM
    awesome............. SKAT

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 7:22:00 PM
    Susan, witty and seductive... very original and creative. Congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 6:22:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserve win. Wow, edgy and to the point, powerful write Sue. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 5:27:00 PM
    wow, Susan, check this out, you are a top winner among only six top tens!! Congrats.

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 10:33:00 AM
    goes the weasel ..pd

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 5:48:00 AM
    odd, I like that she only gives a glance, like he's relly not worth looking at, interesting.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:20:00 AM
    Susan for all those full of themselves baboons. Perfect. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 1:10:00 AM
    Susan congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 11:11:00 PM
    Susan, thank you for supporting my contest!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 10:47:00 PM
    Holy Cow!! ...and Wow! Extremely brilliant! I love this poem, Susan! It's my new FAV! Im quite surprised! Excellent! Congrats on your win in Chris' Contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 9:06:00 PM
    Awesome to see you on this list. I got on the other list of his. not this one. BIG congrats, Susan. I love this one too.

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 3:15:00 PM
    Intense tho'ts....evil-lurking in his lust-filled eyes....whoa. Great analogy to bubble gum bc it's pretty cheap too! Congrats on your win, Susan. :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 12:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning place xx

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 11:24:00 AM
    You've Said so much with so few words! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 10:25:00 AM
    LOL,YOU ARE A VERY INTERESTING AND INSPIRATIONAL WRITER! Congratulations on your well deserved win!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 8:56:00 AM
    Wow Susan! So few words but definitely leaves an impact! I certainly enjoyed your metaphor here I think it's very unique using a bubble gum dispenser! Super congrats on your win :D!

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 8:01:00 AM
    awesome poem, Susan. Enjoyed it very much! Congratulations on your win in Chris' contest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 6:58:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Chris' "Be Yourself" contest Susan. Love, Carol