Barbara Gorelick Poet Limerick

Poor Man

We never thought she'd find the right man
Find a more fickle bride if you can..
Poor man hasn't a chance
She's in charge of romance
He stepped into the fire from the pan 

Written in haste for the
"Cousins Wedding" contest...
my appologies...lol

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Francine Roberts October 3, 2012 at 12:03 AM congrats on your win, I am really enjoying reading the winning entries tonight, they are all so great

Poet Destroyer A October 2, 2012 at 2:29 PM Barbara, Congratulations with your fantastic entry for Joann's "My Cousin's Wedding" cheers~ xox~ PD

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2012 at 2:52 PM way to go, Barbara. I knew this would be on the list. Congrats to y ou.

Carol Sunshine Brown October 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM What a super win for you. Congratulations Barbara. Love, Carol

Bukang Liwayway September 30, 2012 at 11:37 AM Congratulations my friend for being a winner!! i like your poem!! (^_^)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 30, 2012 at 11:10 AM Good giggle and big congrats Barbara xx

Sara Kendrick September 28, 2012 at 4:51 PM Cute one..That would be an interesting marriage..Her couldn't find the right man and he from the pan into the fire...Reads like an interesting winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Tahera Mannan September 27, 2012 at 10:51 PM Even in haste it has come out pretty good. Liked it a lot.

Russell Sivey September 27, 2012 at 7:19 PM This is a very funny write Barbara! I loved this awesome poem! You did excellent for the contest, should place high! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2012 at 6:39 PM hey this is GREAT. I love a good limerick for a contest like this one.