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Pondering Forgiveness

To truly forgive is more than just a few words off the tongue More important are the actions that so loudly then are sung What is forgiveness and who has found this action of the heart That shapes the spirit of the bitter one in whom those feelings start A lifetime of misery is in store if you cannot shake the past When those that enter into your life will truly never last For the memories of a love gone bad will haunt the very soul And cause you to refuse to live your life; it takes its toll The heart will grow more calloused towards the ones who enter in And ugly words will soon ensue to build the walls within A parting of the ways will then give in to hanging on Thus causing pain and agony; another loved one now has gone A life's lesson for those of us that have a hard time forgiving. Janice Elaine Smith February 15, 2009

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Date: 5/28/2009 6:02:00 AM
a beautiful poem Janice it is hard sometimes to forgive but with God's help we can forgive in his strength we can do anything, we dont know when Jesus will return but one day we all will be reunited with all our loved ones. God bless you from diane
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Date: 5/28/2009 5:37:00 AM
Beautiful poem Janice - I actually wrote a forgiveness poem quite some time back that I'll post today - It hurt my heart the other day at Walmart but no terms of endearment I just know how much Toni and Michaela and I think of you and I reckon we all make our mistakes - I am Glad that you are happy and I'll try to dig up that poem and repost it - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 5/28/2009 5:25:00 AM
I like you shaping this narrative and giving such a pleasant read ... good write.
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