Pondering

Post-rain transition Parallelogram straw stone Multi-faced Pong

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Date: 11/5/2009 11:31:00 AM

Glad I ran across this creative poem again. Worth more than one read. The imagery is so creative and different. Good job!! Karen

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 10/16/2009 8:43:00 PM

Very good poem. Interesting and poised. Would you pls comment my poem-CauxEvolution... thankfully.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/24/2009 9:34:00 PM

yes, me too ;) pondering..especially line two! Light & Love

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 9/3/2009 7:42:00 PM

Pong like the old school 70s video game? that would be something else. But then this poem does feel like it comes from a different dimension or something weird like that, where stones are made of straws for example:)I can only imagine what other stuff you ponder.

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 9/3/2009 12:31:00 PM

Nice Haiku Cesar, and thank you for very nice comments on my featured poem also.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/2/2009 4:29:00 PM

Great write, Cesar, well done! And thanks for your comment. It closes the lines between Haiku and Senryu. Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2009 12:10:00 PM

I have enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Cesar.Thank you for sharing it here at PoetrySoup, where you have become an asset to the site and to us other poets as well. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/2/2009 11:10:00 AM

Interesting piece Cesar, nice work...Raul

Date: 9/2/2009 8:30:00 AM

Interesting imagery and nice use of alliteration all packed in three lines for the reader to enjoy. Wonderful second line makes this poem work. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comments. Karen