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Pon the Rose Trellis

'pon the rose trellis  
last pale pink rose of summer..
roses' nectar kiss

from lips of lover
rose flavored kisses what bliss..
ummmm ahhh rose kisses 

Written this day:November 11, 2012
Written by: Sara Kendrick

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Seren Roberts

Date: 11/15/2012 2:19:00 PM

Congratulations Sara .......Seren

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2012 6:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in SandyIvy's "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 11/13/2012 8:53:00 PM

ummmm ahhh!!! How cute! Congratulations on your well deserved win, dear Sara! Love, Hanitra

Len Gasun

Date: 11/13/2012 8:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome win my dear Sara. Roses are beautiful and so your poem! I love it! Cheers! love/hugs, LG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2012 4:49:00 PM

yes, I knew this would be on the list. Big congrats, sara. you deserved a win

Joseph May

Date: 11/13/2012 3:22:00 PM

wonderful write...congrats on your win Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/13/2012 1:50:00 PM

Sara, congratulations with your awesome sexy haiku... :-) pd

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 11/13/2012 8:17:00 AM

Sweet and lovely. Congrats!! Jag

Kash Poet

Date: 11/13/2012 5:51:00 AM

ummmm ahhh.....Congratulations Sara on your win:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/13/2012 5:43:00 AM

CONGRATS SARA ON A SULTRY ROSE HAIKU AND A STEAMY WIN TOO LUV ..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2012 1:30:00 AM

Hey, visiting you to say CONGRATULATIONS WITH your winning poem in the contest: "Sexy Haiku" - fun contest and many good suggestions. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/13/2012 1:08:00 AM

Congratulations Sara xx

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 11/12/2012 10:20:00 PM

Sexy haiku. TY, Sandy'

Jack Horne

Date: 11/12/2012 2:43:00 PM

love this romantic write, my friend

Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/12/2012 11:28:00 AM

Genius link between 1st and 2nd haikus... Me-thinks you have mastered this form rather well...soup mail for Sara! - Tim

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 11/12/2012 8:30:00 AM

The beauty of a Yellow Rose always charms me and in this wonderful Haiku you have made it intoxicating by the nectar of beloved's kiss. Great write Sara with stunning beauty of Roses and Roses resembling the softness of lips, which comes from the lovers kiss. Thank you Sara for your kind comments on my series Poem "Tesu" A Folk Love Story” With all good wishes and loves ...Ravindra...Sara K

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/11/2012 8:19:00 PM

You have masterfully crafted a pair of wondrous Haiku here my friend! I really enjoyed reading these two magnificent delights this evening! What a gorgeous piece, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/11/2012 4:44:00 PM

It's delICIOUS. hope it does well in the contest.