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Poetry Disease

-Infected- with *PSD

My luck is tough, 
My life has been rough,
I cannot feel my dreams,
I dream of dreams, that can't be felt.

In the deep corners of my mind
There is something there no one will ever find
I close my eyes and disappear into a world of loneliness
CAN I TELL YOU HOW I FEEL??

This is how I feel!

I feel lost, then I feel complete
How can this be?
Poor little old me~ 
I find myself with this crazy addiction
A state that moves me causing all kinds of unnecessary friction
Becoming another weak addict to something greater than, 
------------Drugs and Alcohol
This affects my entire family
No one around me is sure on how to react
This addiction makes crack look like an antibiotic 
 
I see it in their faces
The disappointment!
The disgrace! 
They gave up the practice when it comes to tough love
Guilty I confess, an addict in my own house
Far from reality, not caring about that man once called my spouse
Yes, I chose my dose of non-fictional poets over him
I don't feel the shame the day I let him walk away
Far, far away, I had nothing to say
Hitting rock bottom, maybe it's too late to rebuild my life
Not wanting to claw my way out of the hole
Rebuilt I will, through a magical poem, in this soup bowl

Here, you find me swimming with a crowd of wonder
Other creative people whose words speak louder than thunder
At first I thought I found a means to lock out all the bother
Hiding from all my responsibilities
Letting go of all my possibilities
Lacking the strong point of running out from the shaft
I sit here--
Sadder than the saddest tears you've ever experienced
Behind the soup screen, is where I found myself
I told nobody else.

I'm failing to admit to my fellow poets
The soup is a wonderful disease,                         
It keeps me from a good sleep,
With all these poems that put my mind at ease
I love the way it has full control, no matter where I go
It's true like an addict, family, friends don't matter anymore
I log on and want more, more and more.

Every poet here has been here for me through good or bad
Like a drunk suck!ng it up when I feel sad

The poetry soup, ~ IS MY VERY OWN SIN CITY!
Here is where I want to spend eternity

Embrace, me in ways that make me happy
Here I feel - - I feel - - SO! - - SO! - -SO!  Free!

A simple disease that needs no cure
Here I feel very secure
This is no drug, here you find no rock & roll
I'm drinking up the soup, like an alcoholic's goal

Spreading the poetry soup disease, puts my mind at ease
Knowing poetry over powers' suicidal thoughts anytime.

Here  ~I~ 
REST IN PEACE 
With A Poetry Soup Disease

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  1. Date: 8/28/2015 12:00:00 PM
    I always admire the tone and voice in your works Linda - you are such an inspiration! :-) Congrats to your placement Linda! ;-)

  1. Date: 8/23/2015 12:07:00 PM
    A disease that would be welcome. Congratulations on your fine win, Linda! Kim

  1. Date: 8/22/2015 9:31:00 AM
    Yes a disease, congrats :)

  1. Date: 8/20/2015 2:42:00 PM
    I am touched and impressed by your poem; as well your self-awareness, and authenticity. Your uniqueness comes to surface in what you write. I hope you will try to embrace how special you are. TX Barbara

  1. Date: 8/20/2015 2:41:00 PM
    Writing poetry like this is why you are a star Linda. Many would love this disease! Congratulations on an excellent poem and win.

  1. Date: 8/20/2015 3:21:00 AM
    I'm pleased to be back rereading this powerful poem, Linda! It has served you well....another worthy win! Congratulations! ~~~ paul

  1. Date: 8/19/2015 11:49:00 PM
    Ah that's superb Linda! Congrats on awesome win!

  1. Date: 8/19/2015 8:59:00 PM
    Poor little you, poetry soup, poetry soup. A nice way to waste your time. lol

  1. Date: 8/19/2015 8:16:00 PM
    Without the ending, this would have been the best. No favoritism, just good poetry.

  1. Date: 5/12/2014 10:40:00 AM
    Bah ! Great feelings with love and respect...I understand that you are not only a good poet but also a great personality...You know that your personality is your precious wealth...Best wish from India forever.......................

  1. Date: 5/6/2014 1:51:00 PM
    Poetrysoup is a haven where we can all rest in peace!!! .. I love that!! ..and like you, I love being infected of this disease... another superb write from your immortal ink, PD!!! :O)) Congratz~~ xoxoxo

  1. Date: 5/6/2014 11:14:00 AM
    Thank you very much Kelly... YEAH... Congrats to me.... ME

  1. Date: 5/5/2014 7:38:00 AM
    exhilarating work so well defined, PD...sweet congrats on your fine spot!.. huggs

  1. Date: 5/3/2014 7:48:00 PM
    congratulation on your win Linda, your poem discribed the life the turmoils the up the downs in the life of an artist...a profound rendering where one can be alone in a crowded room..an artist can

  1. Date: 5/3/2014 6:50:00 PM
    Congrats on the win :)

  1. Date: 5/3/2014 5:21:00 PM
    Whoa.. What a work Linda. A deep and emotional piece that drew me in. Excellent poem and win!

  1. Date: 5/3/2014 3:51:00 PM
    Congratulations, Linda. A most enjoyable, true and somewhat amusing and sad poem -- All at the same time.

  1. Date: 5/3/2014 3:50:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/3/2014 2:12:00 PM
    So strong and emotional, Linda! No, I wouldn't say it's a disease (though described as wonderful)....more of a tonic, a boost....the buoy of salvation. // congrats on a deserved win. // paul

  1. Date: 5/3/2014 11:57:00 AM
    Great. You have called it by its true name. I have burned food, forgotten dates, been late for appointments, lost sleep and angered folks by not even answering me emails or phone calls. because of this disease. Congratulations on your no. 1. Love, Joyce

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