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Poetic Limbo

When I think of love
  Its always her
About how it felt, and when it occurred.
   Amore is now my poetic limbo
With booming drums then crashing cymbals.
       An orchestration
    Of rhythm and rhymes
Which has no bridge during frustrating times.

This continuous movement weakens my knees
And forever conducts each yearning need.
           Truly a soul
       Can't help but rock
   When his mind's just a beacon
         For lusty thoughts.

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  1. Date: 5/2/2010 7:27:00 PM
    Lusty thoughts are cool, its acting out is what one must be careful with. Thanks for stopping by.. Carlus

  1. Date: 5/2/2010 6:58:00 PM
    Those lusty thoughts can be a big problem. smile.. I enjoyed your poem. BG

  1. Date: 5/2/2010 6:05:00 PM