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Poetic Angel

Seventy three miles
if this ancient crow could fly...
in search of a Rose.

Seventy three miles
if this ancient crow could fly....
just a chance to glance.

Seventy three miles
if this ancient crow could fly...
two black coffees please.

Harry J Horsman 2012

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Ajayi Angel-Simon

Date: 12/25/2012 10:17:00 AM

wish you a wonderful Christmas season... Remember the sacred BIRTH of Christ amidst your noble MIRTH... thanks for stopping by my poems... Love... Angel

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2012 12:53:00 AM

lovely thoughts of sweet journey to catch the rose of your heart Harry luv .. thankxx for your very sweet comments to me .. wishing u and Elaine a blessed Thanksgiving ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2012 6:37:00 PM

Harry, thanks for the comments you left me today. I don't have much time to be here, but want you to know I will be searching for some oldies of yours when I can. and hopefully by tomorrow you will have some new poems up. Keep up your writing. it keeps you young!!

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 11/18/2012 5:58:00 PM

you send me a big smile this morning Harry,,,thank you enjoy your pen here.... all the best <3 <3 <3 SK

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/18/2012 4:04:00 PM

I agree with below comments. Made me smile. That's the joy of poetry. Well done my friend. Michael

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/18/2012 2:09:00 PM

Ahhh!!Romantic work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by ...Sara

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/18/2012 12:59:00 PM

Dear Harry, I like how YOU used the First two lines in each Senryu I wrote a senryu where I used the last line as the first of the next Senryu Superb Pen LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry I have been reading Mandy "The Golden Girl"'s" POETRY and reading YOUR many Graceful Comments I was wondering if YOU knew YOU made no Comment on her Poem "Ode to Brenda"...HG

Jack Horne

Date: 11/18/2012 11:59:00 AM

lovely write here, my friend. Congrats on your wins : )

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/18/2012 10:56:00 AM

There appears to be an epidemic of crows flying about. Coffee seems a poor substitute for a rose, perhaps that jolt of caffeine will be just what you need to gap the distance to your rose. As allways Harry, very much enjoyed your flight!