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Poem About the Dawn

As I reached for the sun I felt my eyes change from brown to gold When we walked to the shore We were like angels which have been crowned with glory Yes - GLORY

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/8/2013 12:44:00 PM
Wonderful poem about the dawn...REALLY love that second line...
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Date: 5/4/2013 8:17:00 PM
Your poems are very uplifting. SuZ
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Date: 4/28/2013 1:10:00 AM
this is really nice, matt. Dawn can sure make you feel that way.
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Date: 4/21/2013 10:22:00 AM
Good morning Matthew. i love the changing in your eyes ... and yes, glory is such a feeling.... missing you...LINDA
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Date: 4/21/2013 10:21:00 AM
soup mail.... pd
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