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Please Help Me Sir

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Please Help Me Sir

One night while walking in the park I saw a figure gliding in the dark A glimpse of white, and long red hair I knew it was a ghost as it came near Red stains of blood upon her dress This ghostly girl was not at rest With one hand she beckons me Frozen I stood, I could not flee As I looked closer I could see Her throat was cut from ear to ear My body shook,filled with fear Now I hear her deathly moan Please help me Sir I'm so alone Then like the flicker of fireflies She disappeared before my eyes carolann crowley 12/28/2011

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  1. Date: 9/21/2013 10:29:00 PM
    this is a very creative and scary poem. chilling and spooky. gives the reader chills. nice job

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 2:41:00 PM
    Nice, eerie poem! Terry

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:25:00 PM
    SPOOKY! Love it. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:34:00 AM
    Congratulations so happy to read your featured poem this week Carolann. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 5:12:00 PM
    Perfect, to be featured in October, and SPOOKY!