Pleasant Place

Theres a town called Pleasant Place
where no one has any problems,
the towns folks go about their
business everyday while they are smiling,
they have no need for doctors
because everyones in perfect health,
the towns roads are lined with gold,
so I guess the towns got some wealth,
its a gated community where
the gates have precious pearls,
the place is so beautiful its almost surreal,
if they want to eat they just
go outside and pick off their trees,
and for some reason their exotic pets
don't bite or have any fleas,
the weather is always sunny
and a pleasant 73 degrees,
and no one goes around sneezing 
from all the beautiful lush scenery,
the people here are special
because if they want to they can leave,
but they don't need a plane
or an auto if they have the need,
they just flap their wings and
fly just like an eagle,
they can visit other planets
if it does please them,
and on their heads are crowns
of gold which make them look regal,
the townsfolk are very affectionate
and friendly but especially the mayor,
He's always giving hugs and
asking if anyone needs a favor,
this place I described is what
Heaven will probably be like  
as told by Jesus our Saviour.


"And they shall build houses, and inhabit them, and they shall plant
vineyards, and eat the fruit of them. They shall not build and another
inhabit, they shall not plant, and another eat, for as the days of a tree
are the days of my people, and mine elect shall long enjoy the work
of their hands." Isaiah 65:21, 22

"The wolf and the lamb shall feed together, and the lion shall eat straw
like the bullock, and dust shall be the serpents meat. They shall not
hurt nor destroy in all my holy mountain, saith the Lord." Isaiah 65:25

"And God shall wipe away all tears from their eyes, and there shall be
no more death, neither sorrow, nor crying, neither shall there be any
more pain; for the former things are passed away." Revelation 21:4
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Date: 9/16/2016 4:43:00 PM
Amen! Perfect write my friend! I'm ready!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/16/2016 6:30:00 PM
Thank you Mike, I'm trying to be ready!:)
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