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Playful Day

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Playful Day

The sun shone  brightly at last 
On this breezy spring day 
A  black cat stalked  a yellow bird in play,
As he stepped lightly across the fields of grass
 Covered with dew , Alarmed , the bird flew 
Leaving the cat with nothing to do 

The sun shone brightly 
on this breezy spring day 
As the mouse appeared suddenly 
through the field of  grass
And once again the cat turned to play 

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  1. Date: 10/28/2012 7:06:00 AM
    Very descriptive work..I can just see the scene..Cats are the number one killer of birds..Sara

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 2:52:00 PM
    Sounds so perfectly descriptive of cats. Well done.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:41:00 PM
    I feel real lazy, (in a good way) reading this poem. Just like I am sitting under a shady tree, the witness to this little cat's play. Nice one Jimmy. One love Joy Wells

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 3:10:00 PM
    the mouse saw the danger and quickly ran away,leaving the sorrowful cat with no one to play,lol,your poem dragged me,lol,great write Jim,great write

    joyce Avatar jim joyce
    Date: 10/13/2012 5:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hey thanks ..u write some pretty darn good poetry urself the way u rhyme
  1. Date: 10/13/2012 11:44:00 AM
    A pleasant and sweet poem. - Have a lovely weekend Jim. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    joyce Avatar jim joyce
    Date: 10/13/2012 5:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    t.y. t.y. ...many thanks for the lovely comment