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PLAYFUL AT THE SEA

Olive Eloisa Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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PLAYFUL AT THE SEA

Barefooted, I walk down the sands..
Following the streams of skylights..
Cold water splashes on my legs as leisurely, I walk..
My long hair dance with the wind..
As I began to feel free basking with delight..
I stretched my arms open wide..
Chin above, eyes close as I face the beam of the sun..
I hold steadily then try to turn make rounds...
Like a child, I run with the waves...
Picking pebbles, throwing them to nowhere..
Then again, I run and run..
Uncaring though my clothes clung on me..
I shiver suddenly as icy water touch my flesh..
I dip down seeing clear waters..
I felt serenity, owning a time of my own...
Done with the short dip..
I sat down on the shoreline...
Under the warm sunlight...
Staring beyond the lovely sea..

by: olive_eloi
4:22pm
07/11/2013
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  1. Date: 11/3/2014 3:53:00 PM
    Oh to be playful by the sea, care to join me? Lovely poetry, with beautiful images Olive, James :)

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 11/4/2014 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks much James.. :D!
  1. Date: 11/8/2013 1:46:00 PM
    - Beautiful place to be ... I would also go barefoot on the beach ..... we can go together. - A beautiful poem Olive - nice to read your poems today, thank you! - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 11/4/2014 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes Anne Lise.. :) thanks for this comment. :)