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Playful At the Sea

Barefooted, I walk down the sands.. Following the streams of skylights.. Cold water splashes on my legs as leisurely, I walk.. My long hair dance with the wind.. As I began to feel free basking with delight.. I stretched my arms open wide.. Chin above, eyes close as I face the beam of the sun.. I hold steadily then try to turn make rounds... Like a child, I run with the waves... Picking pebbles, throwing them to nowhere.. Then again, I run and run.. Uncaring though my clothes clung on me.. I shiver suddenly as icy water touch my flesh.. I dip down seeing clear waters.. I felt serenity, owning a time of my own... Done with the short dip.. I sat down on the shoreline... Under the warm sunlight... Staring beyond the lovely sea.. by: olive_eloi 4:22pm 07/11/2013 ------------------------***

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Date: 11/3/2014 3:53:00 PM
Oh to be playful by the sea, care to join me? Lovely poetry, with beautiful images Olive, James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/4/2014 8:07:00 AM
thanks much James.. :D!
Date: 11/8/2013 1:46:00 PM
- Beautiful place to be ... I would also go barefoot on the beach ..... we can go together. - A beautiful poem Olive - nice to read your poems today, thank you! - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/4/2014 8:06:00 AM
yes Anne Lise.. :) thanks for this comment. :)

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