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Play Fire With Fire

Fiery kisses And touches so light Butterflies flutter And lovers collide The craze arises A thriving passion arrives In the mingling of bodies Our souls unite This heat so great It surrenders my screams And I call out your name Please give me that release Too long have i waited Too long to decide melt To feel loved so deeply Where it has never been before I long the touch The feel and roar The sound of my heart As it beats with yours Just one more touch And one more so quick Ur lips on my neck Make me so weak God I couldn’t desire u more than this For anything more Would kill me I’m sure of this BY Amanda.M.Miller

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Amanda Miller

Date: 5/26/2011 11:57:00 AM

if my mum read this. i can already picture her train of thought.but if she does read this. dont worry . i wrote this after reading my first romance novel.....pure work of fiction....:-)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/26/2011 10:03:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amanda. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Amanda Miller
Date: 5/26/2011 11:37:00 AM

thanks a bunch carol. you have no clue how much each comment you've made means to me. you,ve made my day a million times better. thank you

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/26/2011 10:02:00 AM

Beautiful expressions on the love and its feelings, Amanda

Amanda Miller
Date: 5/26/2011 11:38:00 AM

thank you so much. im a novice and have much to learn