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Its been a long tough day, Had enough of things that did not go my way... Let us go out to play.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/12/2010 3:40:00 AM
Fun in the sun I hope but if not fun in the snow. Alluring lines that brings a sense of relaxation. Sara
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Date: 12/7/2009 4:54:00 PM
There is a saying, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy". One interpretation. Good job! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 9/20/2009 6:03:00 PM
Still no dialect entry showing the lovely musical lilt of India....please consider trying! Very happy verse above! Light & Love
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Date: 9/8/2009 3:44:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem this morning Girish. Thank you for sharing your light poetry with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:41:00 AM
Should obey 5/7/5 cylab... though you had something to say. It fits as light poetry. All the best.
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