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Its been a long tough day,
Had enough of things that did not go my way...
Let us go out to play.

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  1. Date: 2/12/2010 3:40:00 AM
    Fun in the sun I hope but if not fun in the snow. Alluring lines that brings a sense of relaxation. Sara

  1. Date: 12/7/2009 4:54:00 PM
    There is a saying, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy". One interpretation. Good job! Peace and love, Audrey

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 6:03:00 PM
    Still no dialect entry showing the lovely musical lilt of India....please consider trying! Very happy verse above! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 3:44:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your poem this morning Girish. Thank you for sharing your light poetry with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 9:45:00 AM
    Simple yet beautiful

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 6:41:00 AM
    Should obey 5/7/5 cylab... though you had something to say. It fits as light poetry. All the best.