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Pitch-Dark Rain: Apocalyptic

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Pitch-Dark Rain: Apocalyptic

Pitch Dark Rain: Apocalyptic vanished polar ice oceans’ currents all askew. . . . skylines blaze scarlet comes a scathing wind scorching land left not immersed. . . . waters turn crimson moans escape parched tongues prayers ascend to ashen skies. . . . pitch-dark rain pounds down
For SKAT's Dark Rain Haiku Contest

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  1. Date: 2/6/2011 4:19:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/4/2011 11:02:00 PM
    Nice trio of haiku poems, Andrea. Congratulations on your win with these fine entries.

  1. Date: 1/24/2011 6:09:00 AM
    Hi Andrea - An excellent haiku. Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

  1. Date: 1/23/2011 8:05:00 AM
    coming back here to say super congrats! I really liked your approach here, Andrea! :) hugs to you :) -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 1/22/2011 7:59:00 AM
    this haiku is beautiful, I'm especially taken with the phrase "skyline blaze scarlet". I really like how it is in a series, it flows very nicely. I rarely give a "7" but you got me on this one. Thanks for your comments on my work. Julie

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 2:12:00 AM
    Nice set of very descriptive haiku.

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 1:33:00 PM
    This was just fantastic Andrea.Congrats on your 6th.place win.~Luv~Teresa

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 7:26:00 PM
    congradulations on your win. T. H.

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 1:26:00 PM
    A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. I enjoyed the read. Carly

  1. Date: 1/18/2011 8:02:00 AM
    A very dark thought on this awesome write. Very descriptive and visual . Congratulations on your win. Love Phyl

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 7:50:00 PM
    Many warm congratulations for this super win Andrea.

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 2:19:00 PM
    Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 12:25:00 PM
    Terrific Dark Haiku set Andrea. Mega congrats with this fine poetry....:)

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 11:07:00 AM
    Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest with these perfect Haikus, Andrea! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 8:48:00 AM
    Awesome, Andrea. Way to go. Lainie

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 8:23:00 AM
    Very dark and brooding !!! Congrats, Andrea!! A great, if foreboding poem!!

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 5:46:00 AM
    Congrats Andrea on your stunning success in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry my friend... enjoy another sweet success and top ten victory with luv..

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 5:36:00 AM
    Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Andrea, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 3:59:00 AM
    A winner from the moment it left your pen!!!! excellent my poet friend...luv Michael

  1. Date: 1/17/2011 3:48:00 AM
    Andrea, congratulations on your win in Irma's contest.. Hope your Monday will be a good one :) love Wilma