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Pisces Come Home

On troubled, moonless nights Restless journeys along her shores Foaming and frothing her warning Her heart beating the pounding surf Her heart beating dark and dangerous She broods, she beckons, she calls Calls me to her cold, deep waters Come, come home to me if you dare…

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/19/2013 6:47:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your well deserved win, Tim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/18/2013 10:55:00 PM

Hi Tim, :) sending smiles.. Congratulations & thanks for supporting my contest. always~ LINDA

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/13/2013 10:17:00 AM

Gosh Tim - this is daring. Think before you go. This is also my sign.. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Kim Van Breda

Date: 10/8/2013 9:05:00 AM

This is so beautiful-- I love the call of the sea depicted here in romantic format. just wondering if this is your birth sign.... I'm not really into astrology myself, but just a thought.

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/3/2013 7:24:00 AM

What a fitting end to this one Tim.. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/2/2013 5:42:00 PM

WOW! LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2013 5:35:00 PM

What an awesome way to show Pisces. So much better than just talking about the traits of the sign. WELL DONE. (btw, I LOVE pepperoni pizza, i only chose to diss it because it worked well to do it with my poems' meter!)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/2/2013 5:08:00 PM

Interesting lines penned..Don't go see Pisces cause I don't want you to feel that cold water..Thanks for stopping by..My father said about a year or maybe longer before he died that anything that was fun, entertaining or taste good was bad for a person and if it wasn't fun or entertaining or tasted terrible it was good for one..He said I don't understand that at all..Ha!!! Sara