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The rift
They say comes from deep
But I beg to differ
Isn’t pink a compromise between
red and white?
At times even slightly
approaching lavender?
So why should it not
make a concession?
An indulgence
A consideration for the niceties
of the heart.
Dear pink alloy
So pure yet so imprudent.
Or is it that the alloy which was
refuses to acknowledge the alloy
which could become?
How my heart yearns for
your sweet fragrance!

Spread your petals and
Bid me inhale.

Copyright © Vicky Tsiluma

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  1. Date: 1/20/2015 7:43:00 AM
    uhh beautiful....beautiful wordplay

  1. Date: 8/6/2014 7:45:00 AM
    Lovely, I like the thought of this.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 1:48:00 PM
    Just 'spread your petals' and unbidden I'll inhale? Lovely poema.

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 2:15:00 PM
    taking in your first post Vicky,, wow this is wonderful

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 7:43:00 AM
    A shiver of compassion transpires between layers of petals, you are showing us your sensitive strong heart, and Oh such dreams for you that I can only divine, I am blowing you a star keep it close, and make a wish tonight by the candles light, take care, blessings from Rose xxx

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 4:54:00 AM
    ‡ Wow, Seduction At Its Most Subtle Yet Finest, Hushed Whispers, My Dear Sweet Beautiful Vicky. I Too Love The Soft Pink Petals Of The Silk Love's Rose. Class Amid Perfumed Erotica In Sensuals Beautiful Colours. The 'Pink Rose,' A Most Beautiful Favourite, Brushed Amid Brilliance. Wow. Thank You Beautiful Vicky, For Your Kind And Lovely Com. Wonderful As Always To Find Your Treasures Near. This Is Beautiful. My Love, Rachel *

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:51:00 PM
    Excellent poetry. I love going back and reading a poets first entry on the Soup. And I'm not disappointed. A true poet you are. Hugs Michael

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 9:13:00 AM
    wow...what a deep insight into the world of colour..

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 10:44:00 AM
    wow, this is so lovely. I especially like the ending lines. VERY romantic.

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 10:44:00 AM
    and a belated congrats for whichever contest this placed in.

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 9/8/2012 1:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 6:48:00 PM
    Great work ..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 12:17:00 PM
    This redefines pensive romance Vicky! I'm awestruck by the composure of this masterful composition - I respect the structure as well - I 'll definitely read this grace again - with respect, J.A.B.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 12:08:00 PM
    nice poem again lovely how you capture the moment I love the smell of lavender thankyou so much for your comments on my poems x davidscott

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 11:51:00 AM
    Vicky just a quick congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 7:09:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win - hope to read more of your poems.

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 4:06:00 PM
    Hi Vicky - Congratulations on your win - well deserved. Kathy

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 3:58:00 PM
    Excellent work! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 2:12:00 PM
    an alloy is a mixture or solution of metals was it a metal rose? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 7/16/2012 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Actually, the poem started out as 'the alloyed rift' intending to bring out brass as the desired product. But it ended up with 'pink rose' - mixture of red and white roses(hypothetically speaking'.Vicky.
  1. Date: 7/16/2012 12:29:00 PM
    Very nice poem... Congratulations on your win! Terry

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 11:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on you win. Refreshing imagery.