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a mispelled word is like a dent in a poem words that don't rhyme ruin the decorum mistakes are no different there like a scratch in the paint if your serious about writing don't use the word "aint" extreemly bad taste can be worse than a scar profain and foul language stain just like tar dull and depressing the dust of disdain what message of wisdom by reading was gained don't blimish the finish polish each word poetry driven respectfully may soon one day be heard

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Date: 4/7/2013 2:49:00 PM
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Date: 4/3/2013 9:26:00 AM
I love your message..excellent write!!
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Date: 4/1/2013 3:09:00 PM
Good advice contained within these lines..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/1/2013 3:42:00 AM
Another clever gem, you seem to take an idea and breathe life into it in your own special way. Always a pleasure to spend time here with you! :)
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Date: 3/31/2013 6:11:00 PM
God gave me a gift of 86,400 seconds today and I want to use a couple of them to say, Thanks I enjoyed this!
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