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pimp my ride

a mispelled word is like a dent
in a poem
words that don't rhyme ruin
the decorum
mistakes are no different
there like a scratch in the paint
if your serious about writing 
don't use the word "aint"
extreemly bad taste can be worse 
than a scar
profain and foul language
stain just like tar
dull and depressing
the dust of disdain
what message of wisdom
by reading was gained
don't blimish the finish
polish each word
poetry driven respectfully
may soon one day be heard

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  1. Date: 4/7/2013 2:49:00 PM

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 9:26:00 AM
    I love your message..excellent write!!

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 3:09:00 PM
    Good advice contained within these lines..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 3:42:00 AM
    Another clever gem, you seem to take an idea and breathe life into it in your own special way. Always a pleasure to spend time here with you! :)

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 6:11:00 PM
    God gave me a gift of 86,400 seconds today and I want to use a couple of them to say, Thanks I enjoyed this!