Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

Piece of my Past

Rachelle Turley Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Piece of my Past which was written by poet Rachelle Turley. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Rachelle Turley

Best Rachelle Turley Poems

+ Fav Poet

Piece of my Past

walking along the beach today,
i saw you,
you looked at me, then slowly 
walked away,
you had told me that you were 
different from the last,
but you turned out to be 
just a piece of my past,
you really know how to make 
me hurt,
was it love? 'cause im no expert,
i thought it was, at the time,
but now lookin back,
you were never mine.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 8/15/2012 12:00:00 AM
    I like this one Rachelle!! You express an entire movie in these few words!! (This is Mrs. CL Creek).

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 1:11:00 PM
    I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Rachelle. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol

    Turley Avatar Rachelle Turley
    Date: 5/24/2012 11:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oooh you are so much welcome!! Your writes are truly inspiring, so keep it up. THanks you ~ I truly hope you have a wonderful weekend and a cheerful day =)
  1. Date: 4/7/2012 6:58:00 PM
    Interesting write. Very open and clear in the point it makes.

    Turley Avatar Rachelle Turley
    Date: 5/4/2012 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks you