Piece of My Past

walking along the beach today,
i saw you,
you looked at me, then slowly 
walked away,
you had told me that you were 
different from the last,
but you turned out to be 
just a piece of my past,
you really know how to make 
me hurt,
was it love? 'cause im no expert,
i thought it was, at the time,
but now lookin back,
you were never mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/15/2012 12:00:00 AM
I like this one Rachelle!! You express an entire movie in these few words!! (This is Mrs. CL Creek).
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Date: 5/9/2012 1:11:00 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Rachelle. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2012 11:00:00 PM
Oooh you are so much welcome!! Your writes are truly inspiring, so keep it up. THanks you ~ I truly hope you have a wonderful weekend and a cheerful day =)
Date: 4/7/2012 6:58:00 PM
Interesting write. Very open and clear in the point it makes.
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Date: 5/4/2012 10:21:00 AM
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