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Death looked me right in the eye. It said, don't worry, it's not time to die. But if your wondering when it'll be. The time will come, I garantee. Intertwining birds of prey. Would cast dispersions feathered grey. Which way to go, evil or good. Not knowing if the other should. Reflective depths beneath the shore. Shows us what heaven has in store. To see beyond the natural realm. Is to know that God is at the helm. Inside out on the avenue. A peek inside an outer view. The day began with constant silence. In a neighborhood without a fence. for Debbie Guzzi's What do you make of this contest.

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Date: 4/17/2013 3:52:00 PM
love the imagery here robert, and the message that comes through each and every stanza,,excellent poetry
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Date: 4/2/2013 7:53:00 PM
I like the way this flows Robert, thank you for reading my Beauty Queen ;}my daughter is 25 works in a bank.
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Date: 4/2/2013 5:37:00 PM
Great flow and rhyme penned in this one..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the stop by..Sara
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Date: 3/25/2013 2:01:00 PM
Excellent !!! I really like those reflective depths.... seems I go there more and more. You did good with this one !!! Hope it made the winners list. I'm not up to date on the lists yet, hope to get there later today. Hope all is well !!
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Date: 3/25/2013 1:41:00 PM
I think this is wonderful....:-)
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Date: 3/21/2013 2:57:00 PM
Good time for reflections... A neighborhood without a fence...O freedom of the rhymes... Good luck for this other contest, Robert! Blessings, Hanitra
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