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Phantom Limb

Similar to a leg ripped loose you learn to hobble on crutches but like a phantom limb the amputation still throbs long after the wound has closed Those few precious seconds between sleeping and waking you are as you once were then the awful will of God dawns then it’s oh yeah, my leg is gone…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/19/2013 9:11:00 PM
hmmm, I never would have got that what you just told me. The missing limb is the actual loss of a person? that makes it even sadder!!
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Date: 11/19/2013 4:08:00 PM
Here is one I somehow missed, and it really is a great poem from you, Tim. Gosh, I hope you are not one with a phantom limb. It must be awful to still feel it there when it is gone. By the way, I grew up loving Herman's Hermits and seeing THEIR movies. Beatles were a bit before my generation but later I learned to really appreciate what they did for the world of popular music.
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Date: 11/2/2013 8:57:00 AM
Dear Tim - things get gone is this world don't they. Kathy
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