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Petals In The Wind

I stand amid the meadow In my dream the wind roars Within my hand are petals ~ Each one special and unique ~ I let them go in the wind From my hands they go drifting While I weep, weep for them ~ Why did I not hold them tighter ~ These petals in the wind So many of my loved ones O, take my kiss upon your lips ~ Take my love up to your heaven ~ God could I have kept one Just one of the precious petals But, all I have are memories ~ And dreams that I hold within ~ _________________________ Free Verse November 25, 2012

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  1. Date: 2/26/2015 7:45:00 PM
    So tender and heartbreaking. Love this sweet poem.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:01:00 AM
    most delicate portrait in breathtaking words luv .. visual imagery invades this romantic piece Constance .. so happy to be able to read u today as we r so busy for holidays with family and business orders ..

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:44:00 AM
    wonderous and sad at the same time. If we try and cling to our loved ones we destroy those beautiful petals and memories in the process. Leo Bauscalia once said that a single rose could be his garden and one friend could be his world. I may not have his exact words but I do like his message.

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 10:25:00 PM
    This is a very sentimental and wondrous write my friend! I am amazed at your skill in writing this powerful poem! Your free verse sure can stir up memories of my own and packs a wallop within its confines! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:50:00 AM
    Lovely dream write... One of my favorite that I have read today.. hugs Michael