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Perhaps a Balloon

i believe that balloons are free even tied to strings they rise above me i'm pretty sure they want the sun and ignore the clouds of everyone i might be mistaken perhaps not of wit but if there's a race to the sky i want to be part of it perhaps a balloon has nothing to lose leaving the ground behind the problem it seems when i let go the string it gets to fly. . . i have to climb

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/10/2010 11:14:00 PM
This made me smile inside. It's a very wonderful poem. Like innocent poetry from a childrens book...love nikki.
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Date: 2/18/2009 9:18:00 PM
definitly!! whimsical- hopeful, I really liked this poem!
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Date: 2/18/2009 8:39:00 PM
Ahhh a dreamer. I suppose most poets are. As long as you watch it as far as you can part of you still gets to fly.
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