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Perfection

A loving thought slips outside a perfect vision it cannot hide Those piercing eyes, your happy smile a perfect vision to dream a while A dream of you and all I see a perfect vision of love eternity Your silent dignity its inner light a perfect vision illuminates my sight A burning hope please hear it true a perfect vision that’s meant for you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/15/2009 2:20:00 PM
i LIKE YOUR POETRY, WELL WRITTEN
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Date: 8/29/2009 5:18:00 AM
Nicely writtten thoughts put to pen I especially like lines one and two. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/29/2009 3:47:00 AM
Beautiful rhyme Gareth, it flowed superbly>>James
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Date: 8/28/2009 11:46:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Gareth. Thank you for sharing.Thank you for your kind comments. Welcome home. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2009 1:41:00 PM
I really like the flow of the poem, good job
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