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Perfect Crime

There is a boy, who I spill all my secrets to. 
Someone that I look forward to seeing everyday. 
A person who I think about all night. 
Who dances through my dreams. 
Who's smile is as warm as the sun. 
Who's hand I want to hold all the time. 
Who's kisses I crave. 
Who's feelings makes my knees weak. 
Who's voice is music whispering in my ear. 
Who makes me smile without trying. 
Who makes me blush with just one thought.
Who I want to love. 
Who sweeps me off my feet. 
Who helps me find peace. 
Who makes my heart beat, faster, and faster, each second i see him. 
There is a boy, who is sweet as suga. 
Who is so funny. 
He is cute.
Gorgeous to me.
A boy who I want to stay with. 
A boy who I never thought could like me back, until the day I found out he did. 
This boy, who is a robber, because he is stealing my breaths. 
Who is a lock picker, because he is breaking through the chains on my heart. 
Who is a king, because he makes me feel like a queen. 
Who is the wind, because he sweeps me off my feet. 
Who is the stars, because he makes them shine in my eyes. 
Who is the moon, because I pray to keep him at night. 
Who is an angel, because I swear he's a gift from God. 
Who drives me crazy, because he's always on my mind. 
A boy, who is in my music, the lyrics to my songs. 
A boy who is my poems, because he's in the words a lot. 
A boy who I am quickly falling for. 
A boy who wont let me hit the floor. 
This boy, I know I'm going to love. 
This boy, I might already love. 
This boy, who makes me less scared. 
Who holds my biggest secrets.
Who has also been hurt.
Who always looks at me the same way, full of happiness and love. 
Who doesn't care what Ive done, as long as I'm his now.
Who would protect me from even my nightmares
This boy, who gives me butterflys.
This boy. This boy. 
He is the only one I want. 
He is perfect to me. 
He is different then everyone else. 
He is unique, and amazing. 
I love this boy. 
He has my heart. 
Baby we'll commit the perfect crime, 
I'll steal your heart, since you've stolen mine.

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  1. Date: 12/26/2013 1:34:00 AM
    Lucky boy, beautiful crime. J.A.B.

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 6:48:00 PM
    nice one, wow i am still so in shock on your age and write. I did start at the age of 12, but dam mine was nothing like yours, i also did not know you had tons of poems. l.o.l. I just found out last week how to open the pages. Stupid me,..always a friend,..p.d.

  1. Date: 10/27/2009 10:12:00 AM
    We live in a romance novel... XooxoXOOx Your Love, .::James::.

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 7:44:00 AM
    nice keep it up

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 12:27:00 PM
    nicely penned, good job

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 2:57:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 6:54:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jese. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 5:23:00 AM
    Now if this is a crime, the world needs more criminals. God Bless and Congrats Jese on "Perfect Crime" being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 6/15/2009 2:52:00 AM
    congratulations on your poem being featured, wonderful work, God bless you from diane

  1. Date: 6/14/2009 10:47:00 PM
    Jese - I wanted to say congratulations on being featured this week, God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 6:14:00 PM
    *tear*... omg... this poem is like you read my mind........ It reminds me of this guy i really like..... I know how you feel

  1. Date: 4/26/2009 9:01:00 PM
    Just pour your heart out on the page dear girl, how sweet it is to find that special and crazy love! An ejoyable read!

  1. Date: 4/24/2009 2:54:00 PM
    Jessica, once again you hit the nail right on the head. This is unique and disticnt. I love it. I have also a featured poem on the week. Ernilando

  1. Date: 4/24/2009 11:39:00 AM
    Wow!! Beautiful...

  1. Date: 4/22/2009 11:53:00 AM
    A sweet poem for a special boy, Jesssica. Your "perfect crime" may bring you eternal happiness. Very nicely written! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/22/2009 10:05:00 AM
    WWWWWOWWW!! I LOVE THIS. I love it! Yes, I love it! Indeed, I love it! GREAT! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/22/2009 8:44:00 AM
    brilliant!! this is what poetry is about being---unique!! I was swept away by reading it! It kept me moving moving moving and feeling it!! Keep it up next Poet !!!