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Perdition vs Salvation

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Perdition vs Salvation

Doomed, grotesque, decaying corpses ~ swollen, swarming with maggots, emit agonizing screams while Hell claims their damned souls. Mangled bodies gasp their last breath. Bloody corpses hang, blackened ~ pus-filled. Vile laughter echoes: Satan reigns supreme. God’s light shines down on me ~ shows me the way. When I kneel to pray, He sends down hope to fill my soul ~ grateful, healed, whole. Love glows bright through dark of night. Heaven’s choir of angels join ’round the faithful. God’s love’s in sight. Salvation’s promise… saved.
Sponsor: Poet ~ Destroyer Contest Name: To Hell and Back ((2 half poem with opposite meanings)) The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.

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  1. Date: 8/9/2012 11:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "To Hell And Back" contest Lucretia. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 6:27:00 PM
    Nice job with the theme of this contest Lucretia. Most of the poems have been such wonderful life lessons. Such reaffirming faith. Congrats on your placement.

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 1:22:00 PM
    Lucretia congrats on your win, love it...David

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 12:38:00 AM
    Congrats on your wonderful win Lucretia

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 8:32:00 PM
    LUCRETIA :-) , this has been my favorite contest out of all the ones I have sponsored this year.. Congratulations and thank you for the double journey... good night... XOX~ PD

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 1:11:00 AM
    Lucretia an excellent entree for the contest, love the poem, good luck...David