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Pensive Blues

Pensive Blues Unwrapping a mellow chord Repeated words one affords Flowers awaiting new bloom Find Blue’s infusing the gloom Waiting upon stars falling Across the sky of wishing An arched conduit of light Opaque in harmony’s flight Catching each note expecting Lovers’ moon unquestioning Rhythm extinguishing flame Silencing slashes of pain Ember’s etching on the sky Kindled visions that now fly A wasteland alight once more Blazing with lyrical score Melody of words spoken Re-acquaint new love’s token Awash in the bluest “Blues” Dreaming of wishes come true By: Debra Squyres 2/26/13 Based on the Blues lyrics of Nora Jones: “Waiting”, “Turn Me On” “Come Away With Me” and “The Nearness of You”.

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Date: 2/27/2013 3:42:00 PM
So much going on in this one. I love how descriptive you are. Kindled visions that now fly. Just one of many that pass by so quickly. Enjoyed reading. :)
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Date: 2/26/2013 3:30:00 PM
You were inspired very nicely in creating this fantastic poem here my friend! I loved reading this amazing write this afternoon! What a fabulous piece, quite the incredible poem! You were so enlightened by those songs and wrote so delightfully, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/26/2013 3:27:00 PM
Debra I like the use of the colours in this piece. well done...David
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