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Pearl Diving

Breathe laden islands rise and fall beneath the lap of crystalline water, a steam graced surface breached, rosettes crest, their gently risings peaks to cap mouthfuls of desire whose lower gate's lie unbreached. Submerged beneath chest's hollow lies a navel fine the round perfection of its form longs, for pointed tongue. A sweeter base can't be found 'bove the water line yet, men would gladly drown to go below hips clung. Below, down deep, nectar bathes the pristine pearl, and petals, rose-red gently part in delight. The heat, the steam the bath, and the lovely girl perhaps, perhaps, he thinks, we'll make of this a night. Date: 3/6/13

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Date: 3/27/2013 4:46:00 PM
Well done Debbie, i like the winning poem, Congrats~SKAT
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Date: 3/26/2013 7:26:00 AM
Wow, Debbie! A well-deserved 1st place win indeed! Thanks for your comment on my poem for your Metamorph contest - To answer your question, yes, it was a lot of fun! I love your contests - They're always original and challenging :)
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Date: 3/23/2013 7:57:00 PM
Richard saying he is a man of the "sea" down here. Funny!!
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Date: 3/23/2013 7:56:00 PM
HOT poem, Debs. WEll done, and congrats.
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Date: 3/23/2013 4:14:00 AM
Congratulations o this Debbie loved it when i first read it and still do xx
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Date: 3/22/2013 11:14:00 PM
Ooh la la, very sensual piece. I myself am a man of the sea. You are oh so talented.
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Date: 3/22/2013 6:28:00 PM
Debbie this is a gem. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/22/2013 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Debbie, very lovely place and poem
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Date: 3/22/2013 4:28:00 PM
A NICE ONE...DG... ALWAYS..PD
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Date: 3/22/2013 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations on this amazing beauty...Debbie...could you consider part 2?.....
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Date: 3/22/2013 2:27:00 PM
When I first read this, I knew it would take 1st place! Congratulations, Debbie!
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Date: 3/22/2013 1:50:00 PM
Only you could write a sexy, sensual, and erotic poem.......and make it so beautifully innocent and pure...lovely lovely!!
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Date: 3/14/2013 2:59:00 PM
Great images and metaphorical. A great write for the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/12/2013 6:20:00 PM
Superb Debbie! What metaphors in pearly pristine waters lie! Going in my favorites.
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Date: 3/9/2013 4:26:00 AM
This is hot oh cool one , naughty but nice xx
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Date: 3/8/2013 4:22:00 PM
wow ever so visual, wish i was there, love this...
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Date: 3/8/2013 8:01:00 AM
Debbie a wonderful image and I love the metaphors...David
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Date: 3/7/2013 8:41:00 PM
Gorgeous! Ummm... I just sent a soup mail, but I think it's okay? Something strange is going on... odd odd odd... xox Dee
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Date: 3/7/2013 1:02:00 PM
Beautiful imagery!!!
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Date: 3/7/2013 1:00:00 PM
Such a beautiful story...very enjoyable
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Date: 3/6/2013 10:37:00 PM
nice write.
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Date: 3/6/2013 9:16:00 PM
so lovely sweet angel Debbie :) always enjoyed your great write :) luv and hugs :) SK
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Date: 3/6/2013 7:50:00 PM
Love it!
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Date: 3/6/2013 7:36:00 PM
This is quite beautiful my friend! I loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a wonderful piece, quite the special poem, Great Work!!
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