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Peaceful Mountain

Clouds on the mountain, Reflecting off the water; An image of peace.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/24/2009 7:50:00 PM

Dear Elizabeth, Hope all is well with YOU and YOURS I don,t see any new POST I think I told YOU I live on top of a mountain I see this as a Perfect Haiku LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/12/2009 4:04:00 PM

Dear Elizabeth, Such serenity expressed I live on top of a mountain, often surrounded by clouds YOU have captured peacefulness perfectly LOVEYOUr Poetic Genius ALWAYS...H G

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/14/2009 4:39:00 PM

Elizabeth, mountains and oceans always offer such serenity. Great work! (I wrote a poem about a mountain, too, but yours is far more concise!) Happy Valentine's Day - Carolyn

Daniel Neal

Date: 1/6/2009 1:23:00 PM

Beautiful scene you captured with words. DN

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/5/2009 6:00:00 PM

Nice work, I love you way you paint a beautiful picture with just a few words...Raul

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/5/2009 4:27:00 PM

A lovely picture this makes in my mind. ~ Great haiku!~Carrie

Monica Engeler

Date: 1/5/2009 3:10:00 PM

Sounds peaceful to me. I see your words in my mind. Nice.

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/5/2009 3:02:00 PM

silence and the sounds of relaxation always gives me the feelings of peace as well. Short yet powerful poetry and I really enjoyed reading it. Have a nice dayl.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 1/5/2009 3:01:00 PM

It sounds like heaven to me just lovely! Laura :)