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Peace At Mind

I just need to close my eyes, close my eyes and concentrate on my center, every breath is of absolute peace, I can hear the birds chirp, I can feel the wind clash against my body, what a gentle of notice. Nature is strong with my new sight, I can see much more clear far more clear than ever. Oh how the taste of nature is as beauéd, it is a taste non required by taste buds, I can see much more clear with this peace at mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/27/2011 11:37:00 AM
GREAT, IVY
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Date: 10/27/2011 6:05:00 AM
Very nice. Strong message. Great use of metaphors.
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