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Pd's Birthday Unicorn

Wake up! It's past ten in the morn! Didn't you hear me honking my HORN? Remember? It's October seven! You forgot? God lord up in heaven! Yes it's true, my fanciful dame I'm that steed of mythical fame Your wishes shall be my command So may I have the pleasure, Madame? You didn't know that Unicorns fly? Oh yeah! We can streak through the sky! Be prepared for a dazzling flight 'Cause I travel at the speed of light Got a nice little flat on the moon (No sweat, I got plenty of room) We'll fly first to Venus, then Mars Then I'll take you to visit the stars Don't rub your eyes, I am real, PD I exist just because you believe C'mon! Time's-a-wastin' you know Are you ready? Hop on! Here we go!... By: Tim Ryerson Dedicated to PD in honor of her birthday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/17/2013 2:01:00 PM
Congrats on the winning Tim..'
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Date: 6/16/2013 12:16:00 PM
gosh, I think I never saw this one before. It's very clever, Tim. Love it, and congratulations.
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Date: 6/16/2013 2:55:00 AM
Congratulations Tim xx
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Date: 6/16/2013 1:32:00 AM
This is so sweet & lovely poem/ dedication for our very dear favorite poet & friend Linda. My heartfelt congratulations on your great win my dear friend, Tim! Thanks for sharing your amazing write as well. love and big big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 6/15/2013 12:28:00 PM
Tim, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thank you for entering this wonderful loving poem. Thank you for the warm feeling and smiles!!! I posted a sweet blog, to all who took the time in supporting my contest "ALL ABOUT ME..." **YES I SMILE** :-) ..........fav.......... ~xox~ LINDA
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Date: 10/6/2012 12:18:00 AM
Many congrats Tim for this wonderful win.
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Date: 10/5/2012 10:50:00 PM
what an awesome birthday dedication, congrats on your win Tim
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:39:00 PM
A fine dedication Tim. Your 1st place win is fabulous...Congratulations! Cynthia
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Date: 10/5/2012 7:33:00 PM
congrats on your win Tim....fantastic write for PD's birthday dedication
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Date: 10/5/2012 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "Unicorn" contest Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 11:05:00 AM
A very beautiful dedication to our dear friend PD on her very special day…Big Congratulations!!! Hugs!!(^_^)
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Date: 10/5/2012 9:14:00 AM
A delightful verse...sure to please! Cynthia
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:57:00 AM
Great poem, WELL DONE! PD loved this one I'm sure. Lee
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:54:00 AM
love the mood here, tim.. special congrats on your win!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/5/2012 7:19:00 AM
Tim, ha this poem had me in smiles,,, . Congratulations, with my Unicorn Birthday Poem... Ain't I just a greedy one..LOL.. love always~ The Poet Sweet Destroyer ~
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Date: 10/1/2012 7:57:00 AM
She will love this Tim, no doubt about it xx
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Date: 10/1/2012 7:30:00 AM
a charming write Tim....well penned
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Date: 10/1/2012 5:09:00 AM
Beautifully written Tim - it is 10 months for my birthdays, hope you can write one for me in 2013 .... lol ... - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2012 8:52:00 PM
This is a fantastic write for PD's birthday my friend! You have shown her interest of Unicorns quite nicely! I really enjoyed the delightful way you prepared this incredible poem! What a special piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/30/2012 8:33:00 PM
HI TIM! I'm stopping by for a quick peek... thank you very much. I'm liking this poem a lot. No time to saddle up, but I'm in... always~PD
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