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PD Vs Gareth James (The Last Round)

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PD Vs Gareth James (The Last Round)

Tanka, didn’t work for me you see.
Sorry for the wait, I’ve been as busy as a bee.
I see PD is getting a lot of praise
I’m confident, PD, it is not just a phase!

I had to wait to view some of your writes
I had little information, but I let you out of my sights
PD, I have recaptured my Soul today
Shoot me down if you want and have your say

I read your Haiku and it would be easy to hurt
But my friend, that time has gone, no more dirt.
I open my arms to embrace you true
Change of direction, writing about the colour blue

Blue is the colour of protection and the spirit
I give it to you, you can walk forever with it.
Poetry Destroyer IS the wrong name
Poetry Supporter is the correct term, but what a shame.

I wish you luck on you future hits
The day will come you will enter the grand old Ritz
So, the offer is there stands there my dear PD
Hit me hard, knock me out, send me to sea.

Is this the white flag, you tell me?
May be it is, lets wait and see.
Send me to the stocks or chain me up
Poetry police, long term i'll never give-up

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  1. Date: 4/6/2010 3:57:00 PM
    This is nice Gareth. A good way to end a round . I bet the fake destroyer did not expect this one. T.Y. for your many comments.

  1. Date: 4/4/2010 8:37:00 AM
    Finally a truce, to let loose the noose! A white flag waves freely, but is it over? Really?

  1. Date: 4/4/2010 7:54:00 AM
    You came back nice. Paste mine later. Have a good one today.

  1. Date: 4/4/2010 7:13:00 AM
    Truely a man Gareth. This is a better way to finish a round. Gentelmen Style. Lets see if P.D. has it in him. Loved it ...S.K.A.T.

  1. Date: 4/4/2010 6:30:00 AM
    Interesting write that you have posted here in this one..Thanks for the kind comments on my two word poems for it gives me hope...I know nothing about strong drink so if I can write about something that I know nothing about what could I do with what little I know about. Sara

  1. Date: 4/4/2010 6:25:00 AM
    Poetry Supporter does seem like a better name for this talented writer. I have enjoyed the interactions between you -- good-natured and quite entertaining. Happy Easter, Gareth! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/4/2010 5:56:00 AM
    The conclusion, PD will absorb this piece Gareth >> Happy Easter to you and your family >> James