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Pausing Time

Time is not my friend. Like sand slipping between my fingers, time escapes my grasp and flies far away, where it is no more. If only time could be put on pause. 2013 This form is called a waltz wave. It is a 9 line poem with the following syllable count: 1-2-1-2-3-2-1-2-3-4-3-2-1-2-3-2-1-2-1

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Date: 6/4/2015 3:50:00 PM
So simply put and so effective.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/5/2015 12:29:00 PM
Thank you, Patricia! I appreciate you stopping by!
Date: 9/16/2013 5:54:00 PM
Time marches in its own parade. While the rest of us all slowly fade. Eternity is relevant until your time has all been spent. Peace. :)
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Date: 9/14/2013 11:43:00 AM
i like the form and the poem, too!
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