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Path of a Burn

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Path of a Burn

A Dribble a Trickle a Dram a Splash Flowing Down a Brae Past the Steading Rushing Over Rocks Creating Crag and Tails Waves Wash and Bleather on the Bank Water Shimmers and Shines in the Sunlight so Braw Dinnlin the Earth and Trees as it Flows Over Moor and Though Glen Toward Linn and Loch Eventually Passing a Stone-Thrust and Becoming the Sea This is the Path of a Burn.

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  1. Date: 4/28/2012 12:55:00 PM
    There's a wonderful flow here, as we might expect! Nice assonance and alliteration propelling your 'burn' to its final destination. Well done, Dave! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 2:46:00 AM
    makes me think of my holiday in scotland very descriptive love it

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 1:40:00 PM
    Very descriptive..Makes me understand those words that descriptive or tell about that part of the world..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 6:14:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Dave. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 7:17:00 AM
    Well enjoyed the educational poem.....never thought of burn in that sense.....enjoyed!